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Tuesday, 4 July 2017

MY POEM

SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUP DUDES THIS IS ME!!!! Today I am posting a new blog post!!!! It is about a poem thingy that we have all been working on!!! We are making our own poems!!!! Here is my own poem and a screencastify!!! Hope ya all enjoy it!!!

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24 comments:

  1. Hi kaunteya here.It looks like you are a big fan of minecraft.And the middle of the poem has really cool riming words about minecraft.I like minecraft too if you didn't know that. Bye.

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  2. HELLO JILL NOAH HERE! WOW you LOVEEEE!! MINECRAFT!!! SO DO I! YOU COULD TELL US WHAT WAS hard and what was easy?! BYE!!

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  3. Hey Jill this is Nirvana here from rata class.
    I like this so much how you made it funny!
    I think you made a great idea.
    well done you are good at this things

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  4. Hi Jill it's Kirsty here.
    I like it it's a great idea
    I love how you made it FUNNY
    Where did you get the idae from?

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  5. Hi kareem here,
    I like the post because it have lots of Minecraft.
    Best of all is Awesome Minecraft!
    Good job

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  6. Hey Jill!
    This is so cool I like the way you do it to the beat.
    Next time you could write what was hard and what was easy?
    I like MINECRAFT TOO!!!!!
    What is your favorite thing on minecraft?
    Well bye bye from me!

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  7. Hi Jill its me Dani and I like your poem.Just add more full stops ok. Bye :)

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  8. Hey Jill your poem is great my favourite bit was the video. The thing I like about it is you did what the instructions said. What was the hardest bit about your poem?

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  9. Hi jill I like how you put full stop but you should put less exclamation marksblog you latter!!!!

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  10. Hey Jill, Aryan here checking out your blog!
    This poem is really cool!
    I like how you were so enthusiastic in your video!
    Anyways blog ya later!

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  11. hi jill me Sophie here. made you can do more blog you only have 2 pots.I am not tring to de mean

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  12. Hi Jill this is amazing!
    I love how you had a really cool voice tone on.
    But maybe next time you could add more verbs in your next poem
    Well bye bye.

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  13. hi my name is charlamaine and i come from waima school and i love minecarft its a fun game to play thank you.

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  14. Hi Jill I must use the word MCPE everytime when i go on your blog i love minecraft

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  15. Hi Jill Kaunteya here. I like your MCPE poem but I couldn't really hair your poem that much. I turned it up but it got more high pitched but it was cool me and my friends thought it was amazing. Bye Jill.

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  16. Hi Jill that's pretty cool that you know all the minecraft stuff. but I don't like minecraft and I also don't know what to do in minecraft. maybe one day you can teach me all about minecraft

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  17. Hey Jill your poem its so cool i wish mine was this cool
    mabey next time you should reply on everyones comments bye bye Jill

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  18. Hi jill it was so funny i like those words you used but your voice was kinda cool but train a little bit until you feel ready then do it but if you put some minecraft animations then that will be good i will like to see what it looks like when you are finished put it on your blog and i might comment on it after watching i loved this chat but i godda go bye bye

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  19. Hi Jill its Jesse here I like minecraft but not that much. Fortnite is my most favourite game blog you later!!!

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  20. Hi Jill. This is an EPIC poem you should check out my poem or my blog. I like it, maybe you should reply on all of these comments.
    Bye bye Jill blog you later!

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  21. Hey Jill it me Skyla from Gilberthorpe school
    How you doing this is a great post love how you use expreshion when you said it Well Done!

    BLOG YA LATER

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  22. Hi Jill it's Siyona here. I like it it's a great idea I love how you made it FUNNY where did you get the idea from? Also maybe put something on your blog that relates to school and work blog your later.

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